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how long can you sit still?
would you wait forever if i asked?       i'm
asking           (begging)          to trace your figure
with the fingers in my eyes.

                           wonderment.
                                                     
                                                     i've never seen such a brilliant hue.
                           wonderment.
                                                   
                                                     words fail me.
                           wonderment.
                                                     
                                                     forgive me for staring

but god made perfection in your skin
:icondawn181:
The lack of capitalization is intentional.

Skin Collection
Skin I: here
Skin II
Skin III
Skin IV: Mine

You may not use this, under any circumstances, without my permission. Skin I (c) dawn181, a.k.a Taylor (me)

EDIT: Most of you might remember this piece as Skin II. I changed the title to Skin I, because after considering the collection as a whole, I found that it made better sense to make this piece the first in the collection.
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:iconadonael:
~Adonael Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is a powerful last line. I also like the use of repetition in 'wonderment' before you followed with a different line each time. It added to its intensity.
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=dawn181 Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconadonael:
~Adonael Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :)
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:icondogmatickerr:
Hey, as long as no one is getting creeped out, stare as long and as lovingly as you like! ;D I know I do :faint:
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=dawn181 Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha :) I do too, for sure
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