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AmorLove
The word resonates in your mind,
A pulsing,
Powerful sensation
Driving you forward,
Paralyzing reason.

Love
It thunders through lives,
Demanding to be known,
Making its self shown.
Changing and shaping
The earth to its will.
Influencing our lives,
Bending out bones
Breaking the barriers that surrender to its weight.

Love
Gentle and delicate
Pure and withstanding.
Filled with outstanding,
Astonishing beauty.
It's bells ringing,
Waves lashing.
The earth unfolding,
Beyond taming.
It's silently riding the currents of the wind,
It's violently cursing through unseen veins.

It's love,
It's freedom,
It's fear,
It

Sever this lifeTake this knife, one last whispered plea.
It's meant to be wielded by thee,
A hilt of silver made just for you.

Take this knife, end your life,
Listen to the voices with proposals so sweet,
Their voices drip with nectar,
Each word laced together with honey.

Take this knife and all will be well.
You can only hurt if you are breathing,
You can only hurt if you are being.

Take this knife dripping with rubies,
Each crimson drop shatters to the ground,
Bells ring out across the land,
Music to my dying ears.

No better drug will you find,
Metal does the job just fine.
It doesn't cost but more than your life,
A fine price you see,
A

A Cyan SightIn front of broken promises and lies,
I choose to look away and close my eyes,
I'm an intruder in my own dreams,
In the end proved to be wrong-all of my beliefs.

In the dark,
I've seen a light,
A bright warm smile,
A cyan sight,
I thought I've found my savior,
But when I tried to take its hand,
It turned into dust,
"-…or was it just out of reach"
In a shadow I've put again my trust?

Falling into hollow,
I've lost my soul,
I got no more a light to follow.
Screaming out my lungs for help,
But there's nobody around to hear,
There's nobody to feel my fear,
Just a cyan sight,
That keeps shining in the dark.
But it's too f

Taking Things To HeartTaking Things to Heart.

Have you ever had the same problem critics?
Telling you your faults, forcing you to admit it?
Analysing your work till the point you wish you never did it?

Then forming and basing judgements on their observations.
Criticisms are hard to accept regardless of the relation.
Your first natural instinct is to defend your work through conversation.

It's not that their criticisms are not valid.
Sometimes I just take it as their refusing my talent.
This causes me to feel less confident and slightly off balance.

I respect any opinion that anyone has to offer.
Sometimes I just take it as if I'm being told of by my mo

Like A BirdBuild me a nest
where I can be reborn.
Give me the wings
so I can learn to fly.
Show me the horizon
I can head toward.
Paint me a blue sky
and I will be free.

TogetherI know you hurt
You suffer great pain
That you feel you must bear alone
But you are not alone
You will never be alone

Take me by the hand
Show me where your mind dwells
Surround me in the darkness
That overcomes you
Let us slowly descend

Together

Never ending loveA love that is true
very faithful indeed
A love that will last
a never ending love it is

The life that I have dreamed
a love that is never ending
The one that I will cherish
and the one that I will love forever

With the one in the day time
the one that stays with me until the night
never ending love there is
and a never ending smile I will have

A life that I always hoped for
is the love for you
A love that is true to my life
a love that will never end

Raindrops fall down
are the tears of my life
wiping them away
as you kiss me goodnight

The sun like my smile
the fresh smell of air
the spirits in my life
is this love th

Deep inside your eyesFeeling of finding the one
every look, every whisper
gazing into your eyes
is now for eternity

The gorgeous eyes you have
I cant help but stare into them
How did I find the perfect one?
The one that truly loves me

I can see you a mile away
crying in happiness
smiling at finding the one
in my life

I look into your eyes
feeling loved
feeling safe
when you are right beside me

Knowing that you care
knowing that you love me
I keep looking deep into your eyes
which hides the truth deep down

That you are the one
my one and only
as I look deep inside your eyes
and lost for all eternity

DreamsI keep on dreaming
every thought in mind
with this picture so wonderful
of a new beginning in life

Very magical
and a dream within a dream
the perfect day of my life
is when my dreams come true

To become the best of me
become a better person
this dream seems so real
and real it shall be

Thoughts after thoughts
a picture so perfect
is this dream in mind
is a dream I will for sure accomplish

All because of youThe tears that fell
became the tears of joy
the joy of being with you
and knowing that someone loves me

The smiles all the time
that are so true to this world
the smile that happens
is all because of you

The dreams became my life
and the nightmares dont exist
just because of you
my life is now worth living

This heart that was broken
has now been repaired
all because of you
this heart is forever yours to keep

All because of you
i can see the brightness in life
all because of you
this life is worth living

The tears dont fall for pain
but for happiness in this life
all the pain that has happened
are finally healed now in m

ForeverWith every stare that happens
every words we say
Forever is the key
within each other hearts

Hold me in your arms
never leave my side
With the kiss that never ends
and the heart racing in the chest

Forever is the word
that will always stay
With you holding my hand
and never let me go

As this world so evil
with nothing to feel
This life that brought me here
each wish is all because of you

Stay with me forever?
The kiss that never ends
Hold me forever?
with the warmth deep inside

Cherish every moment
as my breath fades away
Lets run away together
and start a new life all over

Each day that brings me here
makes me strong

I just want to let you knowThere is something about you
that makes me smile so much
something that makes this life
a life that I always dreamed

With everything in life
your still by my side
there is something about you
that made me fall in love

I see you in my future
as you are right now
I see you holding me
as we face this world together

Forever this is true
my life I give to you
my heart is all for you
and this world we built together

A life full of happiness
a life full of joy
I just wanted to let you know
that I will love you until the end

My loveNever had a true somebody
a true anything
someone that can make myself worth living

Never in my life
have I been this happy
just seeing you makes me get the butterflies

All my life I wanted my true love
and I never once have found it
until the day I met you

With every smiles
and all the laughs
each one is all because of you

My life is now complete
that this is forever the choice I male
cause deep down you mean the most to me

Cause it is true
I never been this happy
until the day that I met you

I love youYou are my love
You are my everything
You are the only one
that took my heart completely

I love you
and only you in sight
You are like the sun
brighting up my life

There is no words
to describe how I feel about you
cause to tell you the truth
my love is undescribable for you

All i can say
and all i can do
is to love you like always
and be there for you

Cause there is no words in sight
to describe how i feel about you
but to tell you the truth
You are my life

Anything i can do
anything i can risk
anything in this world
is to be with you always

Cause it is true
you are my soul
and you are the light
to my darkness

An

In the nightI lay in the corner
all alone in this darkness
screaming inside my head
wishing the pain will go away

Running into the darkness
crying every deadly tear
screaming of the pain
and howling at the moon

The moonlit shining
i run back to the corner
howling in the night
and crying every tear i got

The pain is deep
screaming my heart out
with every tear that falls
the cuts will become deeper

Screaming into the night
laying in the darken corner
all alone in this night
wishing the pain will just go away...

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Nor can I beat you in a fight.
I can't run fast,
Nor can I throw a punch.
But that doesn't mean I'm weak.

I'm strong,
Stronger than you'll ever be.
True strength comes from the mind,
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Just One Night

by =dawn181, Oct 2, 2011, 6:50:07 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Erotic / Free Verse

I want to write beautiful words on your skin.
Tattoo them with ink mixed with berries and blood.
I want to whisper my love in sweet, gasping breaths.
The words will seep deep and etch forever my name.
I'll make a mark in your life,
You'll be forever divine,
Forever mine.

Let's get drunk off each other,
My breath reeking of wine,
Yours smoky and sweet.
I'll pull you along on a leash made of roses
Picked straight from the garden,
Thorns dripping with love, a deadly red poison
A sticky, crimson substance addictive and tart.
I'll make a mark in your life,
You'll be forever divine,
Forever mine.

Close your eyes and count to ten,
Trust me not to take your life.
I'm learning a language known only to us,
Each gasp, breath, and jagged promise
Creating a rhythm of love lost to others.
I wish to place a finger on your lips
Trace your face and kiss your jaw.
Just like the blind learning to see,
I'm creating a map for a world just for me.
I'll make a mark in your life,
You'll be forever divine,
Forever mine.

Just One Nightby =dawn181

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Erotic / Free Verse

I like the second stanza, the first one is ehh, and i hate the third. i spent over half an hour on it. i could not find a version i liked.

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~ThinkingPanda Nov 9, 2011

I can't help but to fav this, excellent work.

=dawn181 Nov 9, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

thank you

~ThinkingPanda Nov 10, 2011

welcome

~Femme-Fatale333 Oct 23, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

I think it has a lot of fantastic imagery, and a real potential if you still don't like it. It's good as is, the flow is excellent. One quick question: second stanza, is it supposed to be thrones or is it thorns? Cause it makes sense as thorns, but I can kind of also see it as thrones. Well done.

=dawn181 Oct 23, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

opps thanks for catching that typo, its supposed to be throns.
Thank you

I might change it later this summer once my talents have improved, because if I change it, I want it to be amazing.

~Femme-Fatale333 Oct 24, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

it's very much well on its way

=dawn181 Oct 24, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

thanks (:

~Ithiliendude Oct 4, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Wow, this is powerful stuff! Very forceful and aggressive: my kinda love!

Great job...

=dawn181 Oct 4, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

haha thanks so much!

*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 4, 2011 Professional Writer

beautiful

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