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I am ME projectI am careful
I am vain
I am a dreamer
I am stubborn
I am loving
I am lost
I am a child of God
I am insecure
I am independent
I am lazy
I am loyal
I am doubtful
I am proud
I am selfish

I am ME.

MovedThe seas swell up seperating the two of us.
Your face is barley visable so far away.
All I have is memories of you,
And if I close my eyes I see your face.
I see the smile and the way your eyes dance.
But I know now your smile has faded.
I sense, rather then see, the tears on your face.

What onced seemed far away is nothing compared to this.
The hole in me has swelled to three times its size.
What once took and hour will now take days.
No longer will I hear your voice carry,
The sound of your laugh that will suddenly be heard.

Apart in distance but never in heart.
That saying does little to comfort me.
And now, as the tears fa

StarsAs the sun came up,
I cried for hours.
I gazed up at the sky hoping for a glimpse
Of the stars that sheltered me during the night.
I fashioned a boat out of a hickory spoon
And sailed the seas of melting ice.
I thought that if I were to be a sailor
And search the sky for the North Star as all sea-goers do
That I would find my comfort blinking, leading the way.
But atlas, the sun was too bright.
I closed my eyes and only hoped I'd guess right and sailed on in hopes to find
The stars that used to guide me.

As word of my peril reached those of the sky
Something in their heart opened up and the winged beasts flew,
Desperate to p

Reborn: HaikuEyes flutter open
Her soul is at last reborn
In a world of peace

Six Word StoryLost at sea, she drifts west.

Six Word StoryAlone in the darkness, forever forgotten.

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Inside Your Blue Eyes

by =dawn181, Jun 25, 2011, 2:19:18 PM
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I found my kryptonite
In your shinning eyes.
A blue so bright,
They hold no lies.

Just one look and I bared it all.
Into my world I let you in.
All that's left to do is fall.

My only regret
Is the feelings
Brought on by your crystal stare.

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Inside Your Blue Eyesby =dawn181

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Just a little something I wrote in the car. I really like the first two lines.

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~graveseller Jun 27, 2011

I do not know what it is that makes us fall in love but once we find it we should never release it from our grasp.

it is a very beautifull poem.

=dawn181 Jun 27, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

You're exactly right.

Thank you so much

~graveseller Jun 27, 2011

you are welcome.

~SilverTidalWave Jun 26, 2011 Student Writer

That's absolutely lovely!

=dawn181 Jun 27, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

Thats what the guy I showed it to said

~SilverTidalWave Jun 27, 2011 Student Writer

Awwwww!

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